hey aamran its my first critique here I'll try to give this masterpiece what it deserves. First of all I like the expression on her face that reminds me of people waiting for a bus except that there is some white spots close to her face that I didn't understand. her pose and the lightning are great ! I love the movement in her hair, the flower adds a lot for the concept. the composition also adds to the concept nothing is moving nothing is happening... the only thing that needs improvement in my opinion is the technique the sand that she is turning into looks like fairy dust was that your intention? I like the ground but the wall looks like a painting especially the clock and the flowers that are very essential to the composition
First of all I like the expression on her face that reminds me of people waiting for a bus except that there is some white spots close to her face that I didn't understand.
her pose and the lightning are great ! I love the movement in her hair, the flower adds a lot for the concept.
the composition also adds to the concept nothing is moving nothing is happening...
the only thing that needs improvement in my opinion is the technique the sand that she is turning into looks like fairy dust was that your intention? I like the ground but the wall looks like a painting especially the clock and the flowers that are very essential to the composition
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